2014년 10월 20일 월요일

First draft

First draft

Introduction
In the world we are not safe because of the disease. It can lead us to death. When medical technonolgy was not developed lots of people died from some disease. How a days world develop many medicine. Many disease are illiminated by this medicine. I want to introduce the dangerous disease. I think Cholera and Plague is the most dangerous disease in the world. Cholera is one of the dangerous and scary ill. Also Plague is one of the dangerous and sacry ill. Then which one is the more dangerous and sacry ill. Then which disease is the most dangerous disease. I think Plague is the most dangerous disease in the world before the medicine developed. There are lots of reasons why plauge is dangerous disease than cholera.

Narraition
People know about my topic but they don't know detail. My research is about the most dangerous and scary disease in the world. I reseach many disease. And I choose two disease cholera and plague. The symptom of both disease. Cholera main symptoms are watery diarrhea and vomiting. Plague main sympotms are fever, headache, chills, and weakness and one or more swollen, tender and painful lymph nodes.  I compared fatality cholera's the highest fatality is over 50 percentage, and plague's the highest fatality is 90 percentage. We can see plague is very scary disease for this rate. In the past cholera and plague becomes endemic globally. First choelra becomes endemic ten times. Each endimic give big damage in human popularity. Another disease plague becomes endemic three times. The well known endemic is London plague, Benes plague, Italy plague. Plague reduce one - third popularity of European popularity.
 
Body
In the past both of disease cholera and plague is very scary disease. Cholera is an infection of the small intestine caused by the baterium Vibrio cholerae. The main symptoms are watery diarrhea and vomiting. This may result in dehydration and in severe cases grayish-bluish skin. Plague is a deadly infectious disease that is caused by the enterobacteria Yersinia pestis, named after the French-Swiss bacteriologist Alexandre Yersin. Plague can occur three form bubonic plague in lymph nodes, septicemic plague in blood vessels, pneumonic plague in lungs. Bubonic plague symtoms that patients develop sudden onset of fever, headache, chills, and weakness and one or more swollen, tender and painful lymph nodes. Septicemic plague symtoms that patients develop fever, chills, extreme weakness, abdominal pain, shock, and possibly bleeding into the skin and other organs. Pneumonic plague patients develop fever, headache, weakness, and a rapidly developing pneumonia with shortness of breath, chest pain, cough, and sometimes bloody or watery mucous. Like this Cholera can prevent easily, however, we can't not prevent plague completely because plague can infect more various way.

Cholera transmission occurs primarily by drinking water or eating food that has been contaminated by the feces (waste product) of an infected person, including one with no apparent symptoms. The severity of the diarrhea and vomiting can lead to rapid dehydration and electrolyte imbalance, and death in some cases. In some research plague can be spread in the air, by direct contact, however, it is just thesis. Actually plague are infected by insect such as rat flea. The symptoms of plague depend on the concentrated areas of infection in each person. It is treatable if detected early. Plague is still endemic in some parts of the world. Plague is a serious illness. If not treated in a short time when the cholera outbreak choelra is very dangerous disease, however, if we dose the medicin can reduce the number of the death. However if plague occur patient was dosed the medicine for 6 days. Both of diseases have the medicine. However plague have to dose medicine more than cholera.

 In 19 century the fatality of cholera is more than 50 percent. So It considered scary disease. In cholera's case the speed of medicine taking is important because if someone take the medicine late who infected cholera he can be die. Also Cholera outbreaks in many place in the history.  In contrast, the fatality of plague is 90 percent in 14 century. At that time people who experienced plague called plague by the disease of evil. Cholera make a lots of the dead. Big cholera outbreaks five times in the history. Also cholera bear us until now in Africa. Plague also outbreaks uncountless in history. Once plague kill the one - third people in Europe. Plague can be infected by contact. However Cholera isn't infected by contact.

Confirmation
Plague is often synonymous with "bubonic plague", but this describes just one of its manifestations. Other names have been used to describe this disease, such as "The Black Plague" and "The Black Death" the latter is now used primarily by scholars to describe the second, and most devastating, pandemic of the disease. Plague can occurcthree form bubonic plague in lymph nodes, septicemic plague in blood vessels, pneumonic plague in lungs. We can be infected various way. The medium of plague pathogenic fungus is raw flea. This medium is invisible easily. Also the fatality of plague is 90 percent in 14 century. The one - three european people in 14 century killed by plague.

Refutation and Concession
Some people have different idea. The oppoent say Cholera occur to this day in africa. However plague isn't occur now a days. Actually plague is not extinct however our environment change that plague cannot occur. So the dangerousless of plague isnot eliminate as cholera. I think the standard of judgement is not correct. Also each medicine of both medicine was developed by doctor, we can cure both disease now a days. So only cholera occur until now in africa is not correct repute. This repute shortage some right reason. Another repute is that now a days lots of dangerous disease was discoverd such as SARS or Novel infulenza. How do you certain plague is the most dangerous disease? I think SARS or Novel influenza is also very scarey disease now a days. However the reason why I choose the plague and cholera which the most dangerous and scary disease in the world is about the number of dead data and fatality. I compared lots of disease before select disease. However disease which the most people die is cholera and plague. So I select these disease.

Conclusion
In conclusion, Plague is more dangerous than cholrea. Plague is the most dangerous disease in the wolrd. I don't think about any antibiotic medicine. Just consider the power of symptom, the fatality of disease, and the number of the dead. So plague has more various route than cholera. Cholera can prevent when we consider water. Cholera can be prevented by careful eating water. However plague can infected by various way. The fatility of cholera is over 50 percent, in contrast, plague's fatility is 90 percent. So plague is more dangerous than cholera